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Smoke: The Best Remedy by ~gabjew90:icongabjew90:



The best thing to do when you feel down,
The best thing you can do to change that frown.

The best way to deal with irritation,
The best way to handle humiliation.

The easiest way to drown out troubles,
The easiest way to make problems muffled.

A simple roll of a special crop,
All your troubles just suddenly stop.

A simple puff on a smoking joint,
What a wonderful feeling, do you get my point?

Although this effect is quicky done,
Just get a match and lighter another one.

9-30-06
©2006-2010 ~gabjew90
:icongabjew90:

Author's Comments

This poem is written about how satisfying smoking is. it could apply to anything smoked: weed, cocaine, etc. doesnt apply to me because i dont do those. for me it's just nic. id also like to enter this into bifftasha's poetry contest.

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:iconbifftasha:
Nicely done! So creative. ^^ I shall add you to my list right now ^^

--
Stupid fork, stupid spoon. Stupid Sun, stupid Moon.
:icondiannana:
nice parallelism~!
i wrote some poems about smoke~:)

--
when eyes located on a star
it blurred the vision
but get loose of it
you'll find there are many shine on u
:icongabjew90:
thanks. where are your poems?
:icondiannana:
in my journal~on my page
don't know how to publish in your kind~

--
when eyes located on a star
it blurred the vision
but get loose of it
you'll find there are many shine on u

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